tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post7853063265608599184..comments2023-06-20T06:22:38.967-07:00Comments on Eileen Astels <em>-- Writing Faithful Romances To Grow With</em>: Omit Redundancy and You'll Liven the ProseEileen Astels Watsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11098531184044931737noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-8401763100737475382008-11-12T11:31:00.000-08:002008-11-12T11:31:00.000-08:00Definitely less bland in the second paragraph! Gre...Definitely less bland in the second paragraph! Great lesson.<BR/><BR/>Something one of my crit buds learned from a craft class (Hi Georgiana) and helped teach me is ending sentences on strong words. Not simply avoiding ending sentences in prepositions, but in really trying to get that strong word at the end, especially in paragraph breaks where the ending word stands out more on the page....Betsy St. Amanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01326874709264159191noreply@blogger.com