tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post4322483132982816338..comments2023-06-20T06:22:38.967-07:00Comments on Eileen Astels <em>-- Writing Faithful Romances To Grow With</em>: Incidents RevisitedEileen Astels Watsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11098531184044931737noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-35769587618239231472011-06-01T12:39:19.933-07:002011-06-01T12:39:19.933-07:00Don't worry about visiting back due to this co...Don't worry about visiting back due to this comment i've snuck in done here. Just popping in to say hi and thank you for the incidents A, F and Z tip. and i love that hydrogen peroxide trick! You can also gargle half HP and water to help kill a sore throat, works better than salt water, but man does it taste nasty!Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-75962969407161453672011-05-30T13:09:24.676-07:002011-05-30T13:09:24.676-07:00You turned the comments off again. The peroxide th...You turned the comments off again. The peroxide thing. I have used it. The gurgling is funny, isn't it? <br /><br />We're bust too. And I want to concentrate on my writing, so I may post once a week this summer. The only problem is I signed up to do ll kinds of blog tours. Three.<br /><br />I like this visual, Eileen. I think this will definitely help me on my new WIP. Glad I stopped by. Happy Memorial Day. :-)Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-24260313391417911922011-05-23T10:00:53.834-07:002011-05-23T10:00:53.834-07:00Thanks for expanding on this. I for one would stil...Thanks for expanding on this. I for one would still love to see actual examples from novels. I'd like to see an incident that ISN'T considered a scene. By the way, I love the snowflake method for initial set up so maybe that's why this concept is intriguing to me. =)Michelle Massarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12841001797112425917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-17170450061130568972011-05-23T04:25:03.315-07:002011-05-23T04:25:03.315-07:00I'm also looking for my black moment somewhere...I'm also looking for my black moment somewhere around U.Carla Gadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01793809172905144101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-24993932425099813862011-05-23T04:21:41.256-07:002011-05-23T04:21:41.256-07:00What a great visual help and good advice!What a great visual help and good advice!Carla Gadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01793809172905144101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-33003249615185585232011-05-20T13:32:53.461-07:002011-05-20T13:32:53.461-07:00I definitely strive to have a disturbance, a first...I definitely strive to have a disturbance, a first doorway (no return), and the second doorway (which leads into the climax)Katie Gansherthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09150375338556869812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-29394352744063831962011-05-20T09:14:46.965-07:002011-05-20T09:14:46.965-07:00Interesting concept! I'll have to chew on it a...Interesting concept! I'll have to chew on it awhile to see. Have a great time at he horse show. It's been awhile since I've been to one, but I love them--minus the smell around the trailers! :)Jessica R. Patchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13614501794157211301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-4481995613602976362011-05-20T07:31:13.866-07:002011-05-20T07:31:13.866-07:00Trying to see where they fit in my story. Nice way...Trying to see where they fit in my story. Nice way to graph it!Linda Glazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04374683352435771715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-13402831666079316632011-05-20T07:14:36.977-07:002011-05-20T07:14:36.977-07:00Interesting concept.
I don't know if I totall...Interesting concept.<br /><br />I don't know if I totally work that way. I do see the A and Z I guess...but most times I let the writing venture its own way and the F comes along naturally.<br /><br />Does that make sense? LOL!<br /><br />Have a great horsey weekend!Loree Huebnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09845600356878587780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-58091558797931646222011-05-20T06:25:23.618-07:002011-05-20T06:25:23.618-07:00Trying to think of what my A, F, and Z are.
I ne...Trying to think of what my A, F, and Z are. <br /><br />I need to work on my A. It's itching my brain at night when I'm trying to sleep.<br /><br />~ WendyWendy Paine Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15136235074351188350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5046333608458306911.post-11933891885677880132011-05-20T06:22:39.590-07:002011-05-20T06:22:39.590-07:00Interesting. It kind of plays into the 3-act struc...Interesting. It kind of plays into the 3-act structure idea, but it's missing a big event around "P". :)<br /><br />Good luck at the horse show! Hopefully you have better weather this weekend. :)Sarah Forgravehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101753891967001104noreply@blogger.com